Wednesday 2 May 2018

In the holidays room 5 and 6 made a descriptive sentence. This is my descriptive sentence. Hope you enjoy it.









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  1. Unknown2 May 2018 at 15:28

    Hi Hannah, well done for getting your drawing done and onto your blog.
    Does your sentence describe the sea? Maybe you could say that in your introduction so that it is clear what your sentence is describing. Remember to always proofread carefully to make sure all your spelling is correct, especially when the words are right there in the book.

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  2. Unknown4 May 2018 at 09:03

    Hi Hannah here thanck youy for your amzing cooment.
    from hannah

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