At Awahono school we had a road safty week. Room 6 made train safty posters, we came up whith five train safty rules each then we add some pictures. Hope you like mine. Please comment if you do.
Hi Hannah, you've come up with 5 very important safety rules for around train tracks. I hope you have shared these with your siblings since there is a train track close to your house. You have spread your rules out on the page and not cluttered it, well done. Mrs Hahn
Hi i'm Lily,from Awahono school and i like your google drawing. It tolled me a lot of things i did not know i love the colours But maybe you could add what will happen if you don't listen
I really liked the way your work was set out it was really clear for me to read. For next time i think you could change the colour of the background and maybe do a colour that makes the words stand out.Besides that your work was really really enjoyable to read.
Hi Hannah, you've come up with 5 very important safety rules for around train tracks. I hope you have shared these with your siblings since there is a train track close to your house. You have spread your rules out on the page and not cluttered it, well done.
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Thank you miss haun
ReplyDeleteHi i'm Lily,from Awahono school and i like your google drawing. It tolled me a lot of things i did not know i love the colours But maybe you could add what will happen if you don't listen
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind and lovley coment lilly I love coment.
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah, its Elsie from lake brunner school.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way your work was set out it was really clear for me to read. For next time i think you could change the colour of the background and maybe do a colour that makes the words stand out.Besides that your work was really really enjoyable to read.
thank you so much Elise i love your coment
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